Getting Married: A Thesis Statement
Thesis Statement
Getting married is a nightmare for people who believe that being single is a blessing but it should be understood that it is the beginning of a new phase of life and it is foreseen as a bond of enchantment and understanding between two individuals.
Technique
The technique that I have appointed to build the above-provided thesis statement is critical thinking. I have determined the topic and mapped my thoughts by narrowing down the main points concerning the topic. This step is followed by a structuring outline to provide the skeleton of the actual paper.
Response # 1
This is a response to the thesis statement written by Charisse Forbes. Charisse, I would suggest that you make the flow of your thesis statement more regular. You have left a question mark that puts readers wondering as to what comes next in the essay that you have written. I would suggest that you make sure that your thesis statement is precise and delivers the main essence of your essay. According to the definition of the thesis statement, I would claim that your thesis statement does not clarify the purpose of your essay.
Response # 2
This is a response to the thesis statement of Habiba Guarana written by appointing the technique of free writing. I believe that you have used freewriting to its best as you have jotted down all the thoughts by keeping your subject in mind. Your thesis statement can be understood easily without any confusion. As far as I am aware of the techniques of writing a thesis statement, I believe that you have made the correct decision of appointing free- writing techniques.
The flow of your thoughts makes complete sense and the subject that you are trying to address in your paper. Moreover, I would consider your thesis statement’s length as an ideal one as it has a flow, accurate sentence structure, and obviously, it is one sentence that says it all.
Getting Married: A Narrative Essay
Introduction
Getting married is a nightmare for people who believe that being single is a blessing but it should be understood that it is the beginning of a new phase of life and it is foreseen as a bond of enchantment and understanding between two individuals. This narrative paper includes my perspective regarding the idea of getting married. Also, I would provide a comparative insight into the viewpoints of people who consider getting married as a way of ruining ones’ freedom.
A partner in Crime
By getting married, a person is more likely to find himself/herself a partner who would always be there to support him/her. It could be in the form of financial help as well as emotional support. Most people consider that the need for a partner is not important in life because they have friends with whom they can share and seek moral support. But it shall be noted that friends can never be considered as reliable forever as they might also get married and they might not be able to give enough time or attention.
Meaningful Life
Getting married is a major step in life that gives a reason and meaning to life. A person does all toil moil to achieve wealth and happiness. All this wealth and happiness could be shared with someone, who can be looked upon during the time of despair. Getting married adds responsibility as a person would have to take care of his or her partner and offspring. It is also true that marriage may cause a lot of arguments between life partners.
However, it is possible that arguments can lead to laughter in a way of having romance when one partner tries to make it up, and therefore, I believe that such arguments add excitement to an individual’s life. Life should be adventurous and have an exciting and comforting companion in life can make it happen.
Happy Finance, Happy Family
A married individual seeks to earn more, and having a companion to support in his or her struggle for a better life is a blessing of marriage. Most people consider that a single individual can save more money by spending on himself/herself only. But, it is not always the case as single individuals are more likely to spend time at parties with friends where they will be spending a lot of money for their enjoyment. By getting married, a sense of responsibility can be achieved, and also a person can easily raise a family by having financial support from the spouse. Both partners can work and earn a happy living and give a healthy future to their children.
Conclusion
Through the above discussion, it could be said that marriage is a way of making life momentous, mannered, and having someone by your side who gives you emotional, sexual, and financial satisfaction. Thus, I prefer to get married when I can find a compatible and supportive companion, and also, recommend others to get married. Being single is for sure a blessing till a certain age but everyone needs someone in life.